新体诗创作

诗:Fails 落空

情难舍 意频熄 奈何相思无觅处

只呎天涯为哪桩 愁绪西厢轩雨阁

爱荡漾 欲无出 千百还转惊燕飞

两手推开窗前月 今夜断然不雨焉!

月明星稀 银空挥灰 朝如青丝暮成雪

残花随水去 败叶回风舞

燕子回时 鸿声渐远 望尽斜阳暮扬帆

生时春恨生 枯时秋恨成

浪迹天涯路重重

青山峻岩壁花黄

Where would I be without your ?

When will I leave?

Which of these is yours?

Long ago….. the little girl…..

longs for your gazing…

But

Fails

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